Saviour Bird...

[Arthur Morris]

Pardon the impertinence, guv'nor, but I'm afraid this one doesn't work for me.
There is something weird happening with the flower that it seems to go from sharp to soft to sharp again. And then the bird is very sharp, almost to the extent that it looks as though it has been superimposed on the scene. It seems to me that the two dominant features are fighting for attention in a very tight space and neither is winning. Best wishes, Gerald

Hey Gerald, First off, you were not being impertinent, you were not "exceeding the bounds of propriety in offering advice." (Quoting Merriam-Webster On-Line.) BPN is all about learning and your advice is greatly appreciated. I took everyone's advice, especially yours and took about an hour in Photoshop to create the re-post which I believe is a huge improvement over the original (that I loved to begin with)..

So thanks!