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Kambiz Shoarinejad
06-28-2017, 07:34 PM
A White-faced Ibis frame from a couple of months ago... Would appreciate any C&C...
Nikon D4, 600mm f/4G, f/5.6, 1/2500sec, ISO 3600
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Arthur Morris
06-29-2017, 02:22 AM
Hi Kambiz, This is a killer dorsal view and you really rocked the colors in the soft light. Some folks may wish for a just a bit more canvas behind the bird and I would not argue with that. It would be easy to lose the o-o-f white blobs along the bottom frame edge if that fits with your personal ethics.
Keep 'em coming. With love, artie
arash_hazeghi
06-29-2017, 02:31 AM
Ditto the nice dorsal view, and the soft light, topside is my favorite view of the ibis. to my eye the sharpest focus was on the near wing, I might try to sharpen the body just a tad more. BG needs some NR and agree with loosing the oof blobs
TFS
John Mack
06-29-2017, 06:57 AM
Very cool looking bird here. Nice background with good flight pose.
Kambiz Shoarinejad
06-29-2017, 12:04 PM
Thank you all for your comments and feedback...
When I am back home later tonight, I will try to post a second version taking into account your feedback...
Kambiz Shoarinejad
06-30-2017, 02:51 AM
Alright, here is my second attempt trying to take your feedback into account... I feel it does look a bit better now, would you agree? Thanks again for your feedback...
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Arthur Morris
06-30-2017, 04:21 AM
I like them both. Where was this image created? with love, artie
Bill Dix
06-30-2017, 09:37 AM
Gorgeous colors on the Ibis, shown nicely in the dorsal view. Nice BG. The NR helps, as does the added sharpening on the wings. The head seems a bit crunchy now.
Kambiz Shoarinejad
06-30-2017, 11:06 AM
I like them both. Where was this image created? with love, artie
San Joaquin Wildlife Reserve in Irvine, CA... It is very close to where I work, and I try to stop by there whenever I get a chance either at lunch time or later in the afternoon before I head back home...
Kambiz Shoarinejad
06-30-2017, 11:06 AM
Thanks a lot Bill... Yes, I see what you are saying about the head. Thanks...
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