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mortezanemati
09-28-2011, 04:30 AM
Camera Model Canon EOS 450D
Owner's Name Morteza Nemati
Shooting Mode Aperture-Priority AE
Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/2500
Av( Aperture Value ) 6.3
Metering Mode Evaluative Metering
Exposure Compensation -1/3
ISO Speed 400
Lens EF400mm f/5.6L USM
Focal Length 400.0 mm
Image Quality RAW
Flash Off
AF Mode One-Shot AF

http://mnphoto.persiangig.com/BPN/IMG_2251.jpg

Thanks

Randy Stout
09-28-2011, 06:58 AM
Morteza:

Excellent job of stopping this fellow. Well exposed, sharp, nice full back wing position. The feet are great.

The composition works well, although since he is landing, might give a bit more below if available.

From a fine tuning of the image, if you feel comfortable doing so, I would be tempted to either slightly darken the luminosity of the large tan clump in LRC or even consider cloning in a little of the green pattern from above to soften it a bit.

Cheers

Randy

PS: Be sure to feel free to comment on other folks images, it helps them and teaches you how to look critically at photographs

Mital Patel
09-28-2011, 09:50 AM
loved this image you made.

Randy has pointed all the points ..

Daniel Cadieux
09-28-2011, 06:33 PM
Randy has made some good points, and while we're at it I would do the same to the bright OOF line touching the belly.

MohsenVahedipour
10-01-2011, 12:01 PM
Excellent timing Morteza. You did it very well. TFS