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Frank Schauf
02-15-2012, 12:57 PM
At Texel, 5DMII, EF500 & EX 1.4x II, 1/2000 sec, f/7.1, ISO 320, freehand.

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Sachin Saraf
02-15-2012, 01:31 PM
Beautiful Image Frank.

PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
02-15-2012, 01:51 PM
Liked the image, Frank.

Grace Scalzo
02-15-2012, 02:37 PM
Beautiful image, Frank. Nice eye contact and pose.

Geir Jensen
02-15-2012, 03:51 PM
Great image. I like the comp and the HA.

Kaustubh Deshpande
02-15-2012, 07:44 PM
Frank, I like the composition, the head angle and the raised crest feathers. some areas look a little hot.

Arthur Morris
02-15-2012, 08:07 PM
KD stole my critique. Love the look back HA and the raised crest. Neck looks hot-a Linear Burn might help. Try starting from scratch and re-converting with no RGB values in the WHITEs greater than 230. (Use the Recovery Slider to get there...)

Arthur Morris
02-15-2012, 08:09 PM
Prabir and Sachin, If you like an image, please let us know what you like about it. We try very hard to avoid becoming just another "great shot" forum and we need your help. Thanks :S3:.

arash_hazeghi
02-15-2012, 08:59 PM
lovely pose and sweet light, I agree with toning down the chest area a bit (red channel)

Frank Schauf
02-15-2012, 09:40 PM
Thank you all for the feedback.
Now, I've reduced the highlights and the red channel, I think, so it looks better.

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Sidharth Kodikal
02-15-2012, 10:29 PM
Gorgeous bird, beautiful light and lovely head turn. I'm looking at the repost on my crappy work monitor, but I would tone down the hot areas selectively without darkening the entire image.

Frank Schauf
02-16-2012, 08:49 AM
Sidharth Yes, that was my mistake.

Here my last version, I think now it better.

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Sidharth Kodikal
02-16-2012, 10:11 AM
Wow, the last repost looks just superb to me. Awesome job recovering details there!

Geir Jensen
02-16-2012, 10:41 AM
Repost is very good . Wery vell done

jack williamson
02-16-2012, 03:37 PM
This last repost is very good Frank! HA, bg, and comp are very good. Love the blue water.

Jack

Arthur Morris
02-16-2012, 03:41 PM
The repost is an improvement though possibly a bit overdone as the WHITEs are a bit grayed out. As I have learned through personal experience it is a fine line :).