Hello Alison!
What a wonderful surprise! WELCOME TO STORY SEQUENCES FORUM:wave:
This is just awesome, great action captured and I like the intensity and build-up to the clash!
I especially like the onlooker in the last frame, by the way this image is my favourite because I get the feeling the subjects are about to jump out of the screen
Nice warm colours and I love the continuity, also the intense and focused look from the characters. Well framed and great work in the field, Alison!
A dynamic sequence with an element of danger, arousing the mind to possible outcomes - hope your protagonists did not get hurt?
Frames 4 and 5 would be so appreciated by our BPN friends from Wildlife Forum, they are so "in your face" and let us not forget about the third character who - in my mind - adds a lot of interest. If those were mine I would selectively lift exposure on the darker areas/ shadows, crop a tad from the top (just below the dark line where the grass begins), and maybe also take off a tad from the bottom of the frame and then share this in the Wildlife Forum.
I thank you so much for sharing, a truly enjoyable sequence and I took great pleasure viewing, cannot wait to see more from you
Kind regards,