Hi Jon, are you able to adjust things so you are at 'eye level' rather than slightly shooting down?
The BKG is a bit boring, it was better where it was broken up in colour and light, making it more authentic in its nature. Colour, again more you could do I feel.
As presented a sliver more at the top, just a wee bit too tight, as an option you could easily extend top & bottom and have a vertical option. OK it's manipulated far away from the original capture, but if declared...
TFS
Steve