Orange tip (Anthocharis cardamines)

[Jonathan Ashton]

• OM Digital Solutions OM-1
• M.40-150mm F2.8 + MC-14
• ƒ/7.1
• 210mm
• 1/320s
• ISO 500
• Jon Ashton
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• Tue, 07 May 2024 11:15 AM
• Jon Ashton
• Adobe Photoshop Camera Raw 16.2.1 (Windows)

Hand held image cropped from portrait mode

OM-1, 40-150mm & MC14 (420mm equiv)

ISO 500, 1/320 sec f7.1

ACR/PSCC

 

[Steve Kaluski]

• Jon Ashton
• Tue, 07 May 2024 11:15 AM
• Jon Ashton
• Adobe Photoshop Lightroom Classic 13.2 (Macintosh)

Hi Jon, I like the overall concept/design, buts still think it's looking all a bit 'Green/Dark' in terms of depth of colour. Did you push the greens? I would also think about doctoring the white area in the BKG, just draws the eye IMHO.

Again just my take.

 

[Jonathan Ashton]

Steve I think I was just a little too heavy handed in the saturaion/vibrance - your looks better but the butterfly looks slightly hazy to me, but the seed head a lot better.

 

[Steve Kaluski]

I was just a little too heavy handed in the saturaion/vibrance

As per previous, it just looks wrong you need to skip these two sliders.

your looks better but the butterfly looks slightly hazy to me, but the seed head a lot better.

Jon are you viewing at 100% actual size in Ps and not in the browser? Its sharp. :bg3:

 

[Jonathan Ashton]

As per previous, it just looks wrong you need to skip these two sliders.




Jon are you viewing at 100% actual size in Ps and not in the browser? Its sharp. :bg3:

I misled you Steve, I didn't mean soft/OOF I meant slightly lacking in contrast perhaps