Rose-throated Becard-female

Diana Zorrilla · Aug 31, 2008

¡Hola!

Here is another one for your critique. It is a female Rose-throated Becard. I would like to hear your comments on the image. There is something about the composition that I am not sure about, but I can´t figure it out yet.

Gracias,
Diana

Model: Canon EOS 30D
Lens (mm): 500
ISO: 100
Aperture: 4.5
Shutter: 1/200
Exp. Comp.: 0.0
Program: Aperture Priority

Gus Cobos · Aug 31, 2008

Buenas noches Diana,
Siempre un placer en ver tus fotos...

Diana, I like your composition, and capture. The bird is placed well in the frame displaying a good head angle and eye contact. The perch is well balanced, and you have sharp details and good color rendition. I like it. You might want to boost the saturation just a little and selective sharpen the eye. good show...looking foward to your next creation...

Harold Davis · Aug 31, 2008

agree with sharpening the eye a bit. good looking bird!!! i think a crop off the top and a slight crop off the right would help this one. i like it!!

Alfred Forns · Aug 31, 2008

Great suggestions !!!

I like it Diana Good exposure, placement and crop ... killer bg. The one thing that bothers me is the perch which sort of overwhelms the little guy !!! Sure wish you could have isolated him some more!! Looks really good !!!

Lance Peters · Aug 31, 2008

Well done - I like - agree with sharpening the eye.

Diana Zorrilla · Sep 1, 2008

Hey!

Thanks everyone for your suggestions!
I really don´t find the image too exiting, but I am concentrated now about making it right and doing the correct optimization.

Saludos,

Diana